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FruitandNut
February 6th, 2005, 11:36 AM
Under the Portway.

(The Portway is a road that runs alongside the River Avon and under Brunel's Clifton Suspension Bridge [in Bristol]. Alcoholics and druggies often sleep under it on a kind of stony ballast.)

Is that hope that shines from under Brunel's span?
-That in rising shines it's warmth onto my pebbled bed.
Overseerer of life's bustling that once I was a part; of family's joys and work's experience.
Now amid alcohol's muddling mists, I lie scratching at unwelcome guests,
while overhead that Welfare State rushes on by.
Then I painfully do turn and sigh,
"there but for the grace of God go I".

An experiment to see if I can make poetry and prose mix!

Snoop
February 6th, 2005, 04:17 PM
A bit of irony mixed in too. Even a vagrant can be humble and appreciative.

Iluvatar
February 6th, 2005, 04:40 PM
That is a really cool poem. The rhythm reminds me of the content, of the life of a 'hobo'. Well done.