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    With Borrowed Eyes

    This is a soulful jazz song with a female sultry voice. Stolen shamelessly from the best email ever written.


    With borrowed eyes I saw my face
    lit up inside the mirror frame
    with borrowed eyes I saw my face
    and nothing will ever be the same
    now all the eyes in every face will nevermore seem out of place
    since I've seen yours

    With mended wings I want to fly
    and feel as the clouds flow all around me
    with mended wings I want to fly
    and share my new love with all I see
    I cherish you, I cherish me, and each and every soul I see
    since I've seen yours

    Come to me, selflessly, happily, all for free,
    break me now, you know how, tenderly, rescue me

    With my new love I feel the world
    the beautiful land, the sea, and the air
    with my new love I feel the world
    a fountain of grace that flows everywhere
    and my new heart forevermore will always be an open door
    since I've known yours

    I can love, I can love, I can love
    I can feel, I can feel, I can feel
    I can love, I can love, I can love
    I can feel, I can feel, I can feel
    I love you
    I've been meek for a whole day now...

    The world is mine!!


    The power of oui.

    impssible

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    Re: With Borrowed Eyes

    GOD......THAT'S JUST FRIGGIN....

    WELL I DON'T EVEN HAVE WORDS TO DESCRIBE IT!

    I loved it. God, I just loved it.
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    Re: With Borrowed Eyes

    I can't stop reading it. I just love it.
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    Re: With Borrowed Eyes

    I think i'm going to cry.
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    Re: With Borrowed Eyes

    I am. I'm going to cry.

    Goddamnit! You made me cry, Perv.
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    Re: With Borrowed Eyes

    Quote Originally Posted by Sylviadorable
    You made me cry, Perv.
    That happens often with my poetry, though it's usually English majors and other poets saying it. But, four responses to one post? I'm flattered.
    I've been meek for a whole day now...

    The world is mine!!


    The power of oui.

    impssible

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    Re: With Borrowed Eyes

    Hm. Da da da da da daa da daaa, da da da da da daada daaaaaa.... catchy!

    I understand Syl's reaction. It's the kind of song that gets better and better with each day that passes!
    Souls of the animal kingdom: eagle, fox, bottle-nose dolphin, octopus, house cat. Okay, let's jump this jump. -- Rod Kimble

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    Re: With Borrowed Eyes

    Quote Originally Posted by HappyLady
    Hm. Da da da da da daa da daaa, da da da da da daada daaaaaa.... catchy!

    I understand Syl's reaction. It's the kind of song that gets better and better with each day that passes!
    What? Just one post? What was wrong with it?
    I've been meek for a whole day now...

    The world is mine!!


    The power of oui.

    impssible

 

 

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